Whither Balloon?

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I love to watch emancipated balloons as they flee higher and higher! And wonder where they came from!

Did Boyfriend's engine get successfully placed?
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Hope the car is functioning again. Cool about the balloon.
A repeated visual theme: an orange sphere on the ground, a yellow sphere in the air...floating into the blue cloud of profanity still hanging over the Pacific Ocean (that's from The Christmas Story--Boyfriend may not compose in profanity like music).

I generally don't like balloons, but this one held my waning attention - proof that it was no ordinary helium-propelled transport.

Boyfriend will be gratified to hear about everyone's concern about the engine. Yes, it was finally placed...after six hours of sweat and swearing. What made it even more 'A Christmas Story'-like was that he was hidden from view (under the truck) when the cussing was going on, the way the father was hidden in the basement when composing his profane tirades.

My favorite phrase: a yellow balloon scaling the heights, so high that if it had been evening it could have been punctured by the crescent moon. You've made poetry out of prose!

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