I Saw A Lake In The Sky

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I love the title, Aubrey. It makes me think that you are a "see-er," a person who sees visions, sees into things. You might enjoy Jung's book Dreams, which talks about the symbolism in dreams, in this case a waking dream, waking vision? Mercury in particular has some significance because it was used in alchemy. I could tell you more but I'd have to refer to the book. Georgia is right though, your description is mesmerizing.
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*shivers*

Lovely. Oh what we could all see if we only remember to look.


SMisery: It was mesmerizing to see; it was too bad that I was crossing the street when I became mesmerized!

Renee: I do believe in the fuller, richer vision. Perhaps I was meant to be near-sighted, to trip over the bumps and roots because I'm looking around, instead of looking at the sidewalk in front of me. (And thank you for the recommendation)

Lauri: It's all there, waiting for you!

i'm there.
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Beautiful. I don't know how to comment on such a post, except to say that I enjoyed it very much.

Please don't ever stop writing.
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This was so beautiful.

I second purplesque's comment. Please don't ever stop writing!
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Another fantastic entry from you; I love the way you see the world.

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